A House Poem by Viktoria Lilith

A House

Rating: 5.0


I cried by myself in a house
A house stocked full of people

I bled by myself in a house
A house with a mother

I broke down by myself in a house
A house that I curse

The pain is here still
In the house that is my body

Like a rose i bloomed without my water
In a house that had no light to grow

I stopped crying in a house
A house that hates me back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahyar Goodarzi 14 January 2010

is that a house? wow what a house. i think more comfortable somewhere else! just kidding. nice impression. comment mine if U can.

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Scott Creed 07 January 2010

all i can say is wow... this is really good. i feel the same way too... check out some of my work

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I kinda feel the same way alot. I think I know how you feel in this poem. I like the way you expressed your emotions thru this. Keep writing that way.

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