A Land Shake With Honey Poem by Antonio Liao

A Land Shake With Honey

Rating: 5.0


like a flavor hand of the clock, pointing from north
to south, as the west direction reflected on the east;
the round table corners the time and goes beyond
the dominion of the past, when the night comes to stay
for another day has welcome today of tomorrow

travel, has transgress the exhausted body and the
longing just to let my desire to earn, penny with a far
away from my dear beloved children, nostalgia the
deepest heart for another vacation with my family

my aspiration has build beautiful house; vineyard,
expensive car, yacht, farm, visit magnificent places,
yet when the soul is empty, it's just a weather without
the prefume scented in the petal of eternity

wish every tears falling down in the golden future, that
await nothing but a nightingale of unspoken desire of
whispering shadow of silent ears

let the standing pleasure of unforgivable hope to wonder
in the foreign land, wait to print in the mud in every
sand; it goes and past, until the tide of the shore wash the
precious dream to touch the dream that ever dream in the
morning sun......

' a poem dedicated to the OFW.....our dear present day
Heroes'

Aon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 28 August 2009

A truly poetic touch is there in this write. Which verse should I talk about. In all these verses the fourth one was really beautiful. Aww, it touched and moved me deeply. A beautiful painting you left in my mind with this write.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

nice imagery. Yes, this one is lovely and beautiful.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2010

wish every tears falling down in the golden future, that await nothing but a nightingale of unspoken desire of whispering shadow of silent ears....sir so rich heritage you have i n your words.. it is difficult to flow with your poetry.. nice one and congrats from mytrye heart.....10 lovely and beautiful..... read mine virginity at stale....spare us

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Yelena M. 05 September 2009

'yet when the soul is empty, it's just a weather without the prefume scented in the petal of eternity..' Antonio, these are my favourite lines that reflect the essence of this beautiful and inspiring poem. The flow of ideas and the language you have chosen to express them are exceptional. Great, thanks for sharing very much. Y.M.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 September 2009

Hi Antonio dear, may the force be with those heroes.An astonishing writes all the way bro.Salamat po'.

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 August 2009

A VERY WONDERFUL TRIBUTE.. elegant piece...with a beautiful title... from your poetic heart to our living heroes... deep write..with a clear image appear as we read your words... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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