A Love For The Sake Of Love Poem by Putholi Arumugham T

A Love For The Sake Of Love

Rating: 4.7


You showered love on him as-if
the sun embraces younger earth
with all her affection unhindered
never thinking for even a second
if he deserved that or not.

More than half of the days
he turned his back to you and
thrown your love in darkness,
you still like a understanding mother
ignored his misdeeds.

But your family of stars
wanted you to dropp this affair,
you tried to act to him as-if
you dont love him anymore and
you stopped loving all.

You behaved as if
you dont know what love is.
I was the one who knew the truth -
You are embodiment of love.
For all those days I was the moon,
a satellite the sun could never have had.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 28 February 2010

You are embodiment of love. For all those days I was the moon, a satellite the sun could never have had..............wow! ! wonderful write eloquently flowing through ingenuity, quite interesting too,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Rachel Anderson 07 March 2010

a good poem with great imagery 10/10 :)

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Maitreyee Joshi 06 March 2010

a very nice poem.the last two lines are so unexpected and the effect of the poem is good, i mean it surprises in the end.

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Marieta Maglas 06 March 2010

interesting reflective poem, thank you for sharing..10/10

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Sally Childress 06 March 2010

Hi Putholi - This is poetry written from the heart - lovely,

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 01 March 2010

Dear Putholi, You are on the basic topic of love.Some good imageries are working here to elaborate your message. The last two lines are nicely crafted. Liked it. Rated high. May I suggest why not become a word-thrift? Use them in a rationing manner. Go for some infinitive or gerund and let the reader have their own conclusion Rajkumar.

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