A Love Song Poem by Asif Andalib

A Love Song



Baby when I see you I can't tell
I love you so much I want to yell
Without you my life will be like hell
I will suffer like in condemned cell
When I am with you I feel so well
I feel like a hero feel like male
You are my pearl my heart is a shell
You are my home in a blissful vale

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 31 October 2012

thats write my friend.the real lovers can change each other. nice work

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Hazel Durham 31 October 2012

Beautiful serenade of such tender love with great rhythm and flow, thanks for sharing.

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Erika Wingo 10 November 2012

Ooh, this is beautiful. I hope she realizes just how lucky she is.....whoever she may be.

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Robin Smith 31 October 2012

A lovely and romantic poem. Nicely done Asif.

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Richard Cady 31 October 2012

nice Asif! wish i could write stuff like this :)

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Poetheart Morgan 31 October 2012

A night of love is coming! ! ! ! ! Nice Asif! ! ! ! !

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Sallam Yassin 31 October 2012

short but deep and fine like a gem

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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