Asif Andalib

Rookie (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

A Love Song - Poem by Asif Andalib

Baby when I see you I can't tell
I love you so much I want to yell
Without you my life will be like hell
I will suffer like in condemned cell
When I am with you I feel so well
I feel like a hero feel like male
You are my pearl my heart is a shell
You are my home in a blissful vale

Comments about A Love Song by Asif Andalib

  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (11/10/2012 2:37:00 AM)

    Ooh, this is beautiful. I hope she realizes just how lucky she is.....whoever she may be. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 120 Points Amanda Laurent (10/31/2012 9:09:00 PM)

    Such open-hearted expression. Love the pearl and shell metaphor :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robin Smith (10/31/2012 8:18:00 PM)

    A lovely and romantic poem. Nicely done Asif. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richard Cady (10/31/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    nice Asif! wish i could write stuff like this :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 397 Points Poetheart Morgan (10/31/2012 1:44:00 PM)

    A night of love is coming! ! ! ! ! Nice Asif! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Erica Borges (10/31/2012 1:17:00 PM)

    You are my pearl my heart is a shell.
    Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,442 Points Sallam Yassin (10/31/2012 12:40:00 PM)

    short but deep and fine like a gem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,712 Points Hazel Durham (10/31/2012 12:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful serenade of such tender love with great rhythm and flow, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/31/2012 11:45:00 AM)

    thats write my friend.the real lovers can change each other.
    nice work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2012

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