(october21998 / calicut, kerala)

What do you think this poem is about?

a man's desire in life

each and everyone has some desire
these desires are endless.

the desire of love-power,
raised him high, very high.

the desire of indifference-power
ragged him down
beyond his imagination.

the desire of thought-power
killed his inner silence.

the desire of money-power
fooled him, his life, his all.

the desire of education-power
made him the best

that's why a man's desire in life
made him to see the world beyond.

Submitted: Sunday, May 20, 2012
Edited: Monday, August 06, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this poem i wrote within 15 minutes as the next day i have to submit it for my class magazine. this was the first poem i wrote in 9 class.
when i was in 8 i wrote the poem mistakes.

Comments about this poem (a man's desire in life by anjana menon )

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  • Vipins Puthooran (11/30/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    Very good poem shows the real talent in you....

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  • Aranthabailu Ummar (9/20/2012 8:38:00 AM)

    I made a small mistake
    to forget her after 10 years
    desires still lingers beyond her foot
    when she smiled me kept scilent
    when she laughed me put mask
    when she admired me roared barring the limit
    now after a long period
    she disguise in my every walk
    no, nothing powered me
    but no desire ruled me

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  • Eindaray Kyaw (9/20/2012 8:12:00 AM)

    Within just 15 minutes...a great idea beautifully came out..!
    Wonderful...great job! !

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  • Sina Farajzadeh (8/6/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    Hi. I believe the one who knows best becomes silent. Shallow water makes more noise. So thought power won't break the silence. I think it's a good poem. I like the powers that you mentioned and I like the last stanza the most. I'd be glad if you comment on my poems too. Thanks.

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  • Ellias Anderson (8/1/2012 3:37:00 AM)

    i like the ending part the most, the consequence is great and fine.
    nice poem.

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  • Fragments Of Light And Love (6/29/2012 3:36:00 PM)

    good and interesting...

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  • Saadat Tahir (6/28/2012 8:15:00 PM)

    nice lines
    interesting and readable

    cheers

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  • Jo George (6/26/2012 10:45:00 PM)

    all these desires ride the peope forward, without desires we achieve nothing, well written poetess.

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  • Kee Thampi (5/20/2012 11:27:00 AM)

    he desire of indifference-power
    ragged him down
    beyond his imagination.
    very narrow road we ride to power fails to gain

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  • Kee Thampi (5/20/2012 11:24:00 AM)

    a true pic of the soul mind in words
    he desire of indifference-power
    ragged him down
    beyond his imagination.

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