(Semptember 11,1991 / GA)

A Mother Child

A mother is a child
She is younger than her children
That is why she learns from them
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  • Tailor Bell (7/28/2006 5:33:00 AM)

    Wonderfully flowing, familiar to everyone yet quite special in itself. Very nicely done. -T. Bell

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  • Daniel Tyler (7/19/2006 4:29:00 PM)

    'A mother is a child
    She is younger than her children
    That is why she learns from them'

    Those lines rival anything I've seen these past few months for sheer poetic excellence- indeed the whole poem is mature, concise and insightful. Your poems are written fror a reason and I like that.

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  • Richelle Gilsdorf (6/28/2006 12:05:00 AM)

    Wow... your poem was touching and very sincere. I really understood what you were talking about. Great job!

    richelle

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  • Leigh A. Hill (6/16/2006 7:37:00 PM)

    what a different poem. no one writes like this anymore.
    i love it.
    love always,
    starr

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  • Evan Moulson (6/9/2006 8:31:00 PM)

    Wow, quite an amazing, touching poem....lots of imagry....excellent.

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  • Troy Younts (6/9/2006 7:01:00 PM)

    '...A being not be seen...' A typo I think but otherwise a very touching poem, congrats!

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  • Geoff Warden (6/6/2006 7:07:00 PM)

    You my young sir......are spectacular

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  • David Gerardino (6/5/2006 11:36:00 PM)

    Of overcoming sin, you have some good lines

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  • Dustin Bennefield (5/25/2006 4:31:00 PM)

    please comment thanks alot.......... Inkweaver

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