Premila Patel


A Natural Green - Poem by Premila Patel

Who coloured the green trees?
Who coloured the green grass?
Who coloured the green hills?
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Comments about A Natural Green by Premila Patel

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/30/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    'Green, Green, Green I admire and respect the vitality you bring in the air that I breathe...'

    Lovely composed lovely poem.10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/28/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    this galaxy of green/at poetic level.. includes.. a vision of cosmic entity..life in its totality (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (5/27/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    he vitality you bring in the air that I breathe.................

    as grin ruffles in green by nature
    green is the vitality of deep youth
    it is the color nature that wears
    eyes seems to redeem by calmness, .........excellent glorification of color that paints with love of youth, yet it never cries by the freedom of will, nature finds its own dexterity of perfection and precision, truth holds good by immortality, yet excellence flows by the grin of green, wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Sie (5/27/2009 5:11:00 PM)

    Green is serene and calming colour...well done Premila..10++
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