Premila Patel

A Quick Snapshot Of The Sky! - Poem by Premila Patel

The sky this morning was stunning…
I felt like a swim in the fresh blue sky ducking and diving! ! !
Pure white clouds so perfectly formed then slowly spreading across like crisp white smoke.
A soft breeze lingering in the air
Good Morning your Majesty!
Aren’t you looking so gorgeous today!

Comments about A Quick Snapshot Of The Sky! by Premila Patel

  • Rookie Shekhar Joshi (6/21/2009 1:05:00 PM)

    very good imagery..........really the sky looks even more wondrous in the morning.........

    good poem....... ;) ......... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 166 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/20/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    depth/significant write..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (6/19/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    Lovely write Premila...Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Sie (6/19/2009 6:49:00 PM)

    A Gentle relaxing poem Premila..10
    Sue (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 19, 2009

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