abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 84 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

A Request - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

As a man from nowhere
I speak on behalf of myself
I wish to see the truth
The truth in all ways
I don't say, what I say
Is the only truth of man
It is just a request
A request to return
Return from this brutal development.

A land is waiting for us
The land which we can establish
Imagine, the love and birds
The freshness and we-feeling
Think of the greens and water
Where all wish to say something
Something of lord and everything of them.

As a person like you
I feel to express all this
Which few may think
But am sure others will blink
What I wish may be too foolish
But in fact no one is wise.


Comments about A Request by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    beautiful request. if only more people ad the same request for peaceful existence. lovely thoughts (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    beautiful request. if only more people ad the same request for peaceful existence. lovely thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessa Marielle Cereneo (7/20/2012 11:40:00 PM)

    like it much...
    Which few may think
    But am sure others will blink
    What I wish may be too foolish
    But in fact no one is wise. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/19/2011 8:47:00 PM)

    What I wish may be too foolish
    But in fact no one is wise... no it is desire and wish and nothing wrong in it... nice poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Yoseph Lupu (12/16/2011 12:12:00 AM)

    A very wise subject you deal with! You really believe, that life has given us much hope! It is true! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michele Kostelnik Parrillo (11/30/2011 2:13:00 PM)

    I love the poem about the land we may reach someday. I call it a Kingdom. It is not of this earth- it is of God. Jesus came here to save us all from this world we made into a pretty awful place. It moved me - to know one so young would want to have a beautiful land where there is no suffering and only beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anthony Zeigler (11/29/2011 7:34:00 AM)

    Wow....This really just made my day. im walking in school all upset and i read this. Fantastic!
    'What I wish may be too foolish
    But in fact no one is wise.' Epic (Report) Reply

  • Rookie grame peele (11/17/2011 3:55:00 AM)

    i hope your angle fits well to the present context. nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie lover of poetry sweet (11/9/2011 4:22:00 AM)

    your request needs to be accepted brother. excellent 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cathy Yancey-serna (11/9/2011 3:47:00 AM)

    Loved it! Seems to be longing for peace & acceptence (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 9, 2011


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