A Sad End Poem by Jean-luc Le Maistre

A Sad End

Rating: 5.0


With my pike I swing away,
For it is my enemy I have to slay,
I do not wish to die in war,
For it is filled, with blood and gore.

As I charge into battle,
All I hear, is my armor rattle,
I run and strike,
Impaling a man, with my pike.

Standing there in my might,
This man had given up the fight,
The man before me I have seen,
At the time, we were only teens.

That man, fallen to the ground,
My world had turned upside down,
That man put to his end,
I had realized this was a sad end,

For he was, my best friend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 16 January 2012

Like it, for your first poem its very very good. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, The Corrupt.

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Jean-luc Le Maistre 16 January 2012

please don't judge too harshly this is my first ever poem, I would appreciate if you gave me tips, hints or grammar correction

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