lady grace


A Single Wish - Poem by lady grace

if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the moment we kissed
where in your arms, I laid and rest
thousand times you made your promises...

if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the moment
when you first visit our dwelling
and ask my hand from them...

if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the days
when I cried over your naughty words
and sealed my lips with kisses...

if only i could have one wish
i'll ask for one of these three wishes
it wasn't me who let you go
hope these wishes are your wishes too..


Comments about A Single Wish by lady grace

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/19/2010 4:08:00 PM)

    Healthy high calorie romantic wish…keep no doubt …sure to come true...he’ll be yours and solely yours..I too wish lady the same
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10+ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (12/31/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    Hats off to your words, imagination and to the kind of heart you have :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,174 Points Saadat Tahir (9/4/2009 10:36:00 PM)

    lady...wonderful poem... touches deep down and works on you
    superb presentation
    well done
    cheers and ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (9/4/2009 8:59:00 AM)

    How romantic, I remember myself using these lovable lines to one of my girlfriends when I was still a naughty teener. I wish I could go back to that exciting period of time. Hi-school days, yah know? That could be my single wish then... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Courtney Loren (9/2/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    i loved the meaning of this poem.. it was nice.. keep writting dear... cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (9/1/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    Touching and most poetic finish.
    Ten
    dr. sakti (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (8/30/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    I CAN ONLY SAY THIS, THAT MAY THE GOOD LORD GRANT YOUR WISH!
    AND I WOULD LIKE TO WISH THAT WITHOUT TELLING YOU TO READ A POEM IN RETURN! MINE IS AN UNCONDITIONAL WISH!
    -RAJ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (8/28/2009 12:55:00 PM)

    Wishes from the heart, rich and dear. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/28/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    This is so simply romantic......sweet and sensitive.......yet passionate too! 10 love Karin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 260 Points Rafique Farooqi (8/28/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    That sweet wish.....for lucky moment......a hope that lingers in heart beats,
    remain vital with every breath,
    And with every move...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ying Escalona (8/25/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    ug nag basa ang iyang mga ngabil sa katam-is
    pasiriti ko ding (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Deborah Cromer (8/25/2009 12:19:00 AM)

    Dear wishes all written out from the heart. Deep and meaningful this is a very touching poem. There is sadness that escapes from your soul and talks to the reader. There is reason for all. We all wish to go back to make things different sometimes...but it is not to be. Accepting life as it plays out is so very difficult at times, we need to have strength. Find happiness and share. Thanks for sharing your poetry with me. DC (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,569 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (8/24/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    passion well articulated. shan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    if I have one single wish
    i’ll go back to the moment we kissed
    where in your arms, I laid and rest
    thousand times you made your promises....single wish to make your dreams fulfilled with strong desire and as tribute.....10

    I shall continue to thrive
    Your spirit will live and may be revived
    I shall make it livelier than life
    Prove to be honest and dedicated wife
    .........read mine 'anniversary' (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,174 Points Saadat Tahir (8/22/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    yup.....its two to tango....
    but u just accomplished a crane dance complete with beak rubbing and wing flapping...in words and lines...
    beautiful....loved reading it....

    i am sending it to some friends ttoo..
    cheers and ten
    naiz...welldone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Fay Slimm (8/22/2009 1:12:00 PM)

    Last two lines are telling Naizz, , , , 'it wasn't me who let you go - hope these are your wishes too.' may the reality you wish come true....10/10 from Fay. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (8/22/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    The wishes God wouldn't hesistate to grant...........a good write.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (8/22/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    Well dear Lady, I do sincerely wish, that your single wish does become a reality
    pretty soon!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carl Harris (8/22/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    This is a very lovely expression of love in nearly every line, Naizz, and I enjoyed reading this charming poem quite a bit. Sadly, we only rarely can go back and relive an old romance. But when we do, there is nothing else on earth like it! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (8/22/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    A beautiful touch of your poetic heart Naizz...so tender in tone...it touches the heart whilst reading...it's a stunning poem my lovely lady...keep up the wonderful work....this's beautiful in every way...10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 22, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 6, 2009


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