She draws a circle around her man
With a strict warning
Never think of crossing this circle
Stand there till I come
She went shopping for so long.
Poor chap stood stand still for a long.
Lovely maid came singing in,
Ringing in twists and turns.
On seeing him
She looked at him in a mockery style.
After standing prolonged
His eyes too flung at her captivating style.
He lost his balance and fell down.
The circle was seen nowhere.
He made a new circle
Then he stood perfectly still like a statue.
You know very well,
To all those who are already engaged.
A lesson to be learnt by the bachelors,
What a wife can do?
Ignoring his innocent looks.
Wife sniffed her man encircling him.
And saw the circle position changed.
Many utensils flung on him.
A door was shut with a
Big Bang on him.
She never left her man alone.
Now for shopping,
He was fully loaded,
With all the stuffs,
She had seen in sales.
Poor chap was carrying
All the way home.
As a double punishment
His credit card was swiped
To the maximum in one swap!
Don't ever fool your wife
This small pinch of love could be your big punch
Her eyes, ears, nose, teeth, heart always encircles her dear husband.
Her all senses works in full swing when it comes to her dear husband.
Though quite possessive she may be,
But she loves you dear, to her heart.
Don't ever fool your wife
For she is sure to give you A Small Pinch With Love!
Enjoy the beauty of love with your pretty and possessive wife!
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.
Geetha Jayakumar.
What a lovely meaning you gave to Luxman Rekha. It started with a fun and ended in a lovely message that such possessive actions show the true love.
A beautiful tale with amazing rendering! The way the themes sprouting in your imagination is quite remarkable, Geetha.
She draws a circle around her man With a strict warning Never think of crossing this circle Stand there till I come She went shopping for so long. Poor chap stood stand still for a long..............GREAT PIECE OM IMAGINATIONS..........UNIQUE AND HEART-TOUCHING THEME........THANKS.
A very possessive lover can be suffocating and ultimately cause a lot of distress in bliss of love. A well articulated poem written with insight to capture the conviction of the poet. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
She may bay rude, possessive, demanding too Don't annoy her nor fight fight with your love So much she loves you, does not like to share you......
Don't ever fool your wife This small pinch of love could be your big punch.....................awesome write......................enjoyed this beautiful poem...typical Indian married life...great...
Women shorts of phantasmagoria, the luxman rekha the forbidden line for man....don't cross the boundary be within limit thank u
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice one crafted beautifully with wonderful loving words......Geetha......punch with a pinch of love