I was nice with him
he was nice with me,
and the friendship continued,
until he started ignoring me!
I know I must have committed something wrong,
but he never told me what's that something,
Instead of ignoring if he would have slapped me,
and said, "You my ugly friend, you did it with me! "
I would have encircled him in my arms and would have replied,
"I am sorry sweetheart; I don't know how I did it?
Another slap on my left cheek, it's closer to my heart,
but only if you are a lovely true friend."
Communication in any relationship is very important and essential......There are very few, who express their true feelings....Liked it Janab....10+++
True friendship is a fortune definitely and having beautiful understanding between true friends shows new destination in relationship. A lovely true friend remains very closer in heart. Interesting and thoughtful poem shared really.10
Each and every lines and words are true.....loved it so much.....u have described a true picture of truth pain ignorance....Wonderful sharing as like always.....thank you sir for sharing :)
Oh my! Thus is the parting of many. This poem touched me and brought painful memories.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I would have encircled him in my arms and would have replied, I am sorry sweetheart; I don't know how I did it? Another slap on my left cheek, it's closer to my heart, but only if you are a lovely true friend. ohhh beautiful .my dear Akhtar........ you are a master in expressing such wonderful emotions and feelings. thank you. tony