sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Aazaadiyan - Poem by sagar patil.

Pairon ki bediyan khaabon ko baandhein nahi re, kabhi nahi re
Mitti ki paraton ko nanhe se ankur bhi cheerein, dheere dheere
Iraade hare bhare jinke seenon mein ghar karein
woh dil ki sunein karein, na darein

Subha ki kirnon ko rokein jo salakhein hain kahan
jo khayalon pe pehre daalein woh aankhein hain kahan
Par khulne ki deri hai parinde ud ke choomenge
aasman, aasman, aasman

Aazadiyan, aazadiyan maange na kabhi
milein milein milein
Aazadiyan aazadiyan jo chheenein wohi
jee lein jee lein jee lein

Kahani khatm hai ya shuruaat hone ko hai
Subha nayi hai ye, ya phir raat hone ko hai

Aane wala waqt dega panahein
ya phir se milenge dorahe
Khabar kya, kya pata


Comments about Aazaadiyan by sagar patil.

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/2/2013 5:32:00 PM)

    Wao you wrote in Urdu Language in such an impressive way..well done (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 930 Points Shahzia Batool (5/4/2013 12:57:00 AM)

    the poem shows a vast imaginative horizon:

    Subha ki kirnon ko rokein jo salakhein hain kahan
    jo khayalon pe pehre daalein woh aankhein hain kahan
    Par khulne ki deri hai parinde ud ke choomenge
    aasman, aasman, aasman

    well-written! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/22/2012 4:33:00 PM)

    so beautiful and truth from the delicate heart of yours......a splendid write
    like always i love it,
    thanks for sharing,
    love,
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lalit Kumar Deb (8/22/2012 1:49:00 PM)

    I have read all the poems. They are reflections of strong emotional feelings. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 22, 2012



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