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Abused Cinderella

Cinderella was a nice gal
Always did what she was told
Put others before herself
Cinderella had lots of hopes and dreams
One day in the town she heard of the ball
CInderella wanted to go
Really really bad
Her step mom gave her touble
Her sisters were ok
But she never went
Beucase no one cared
Poor cinderella cried
Dreams really don't come true
Fairytales are fake
Cinderella never found her prince
She never really went to any ball
She lost all her hopes and dreams in life
Cinderella never got a granted wish
Poor cinderella
True love never found her
When she was old
Cinderella died an old maid
When Cinderella went to heaven
She was treated like a real princess
Angels planed a ball for her
And made her a pretty white gown
Jesus danced with her
Then he took her by the hand
And led her to her handsome chosen prince
It was all worth the shattered hopes
And dreams in life
To have a fairytale ending in heaven

Submitted: Friday, May 02, 2008


Comments about this poem (Abused Cinderella by Bella Ravenstar )

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  • Kayla Joubert (10/19/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    Much much better than the original! !

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  • Marie Martin (4/11/2009 1:38:00 AM)

    WOW, i think that that is all i can say...and thats a good thing trust me!

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  • Ali Riza (10/13/2008 11:21:00 AM)

    well..... it is sort of nice. well keep up the gud work Mrs ravenstar

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