Bella Ravenstar

Rookie (Southern California)

Abused Cinderella - Poem by Bella Ravenstar

Cinderella was a nice gal
Always did what she was told
Put others before herself
Cinderella had lots of hopes and dreams
One day in the town she heard of the ball
CInderella wanted to go
Really really bad
Her step mom gave her touble
Her sisters were ok
But she never went
Beucase no one cared
Poor cinderella cried
Dreams really don't come true
Fairytales are fake
Cinderella never found her prince
She never really went to any ball
She lost all her hopes and dreams in life
Cinderella never got a granted wish
Poor cinderella
True love never found her
When she was old
Cinderella died an old maid
When Cinderella went to heaven
She was treated like a real princess
Angels planed a ball for her
And made her a pretty white gown
Jesus danced with her
Then he took her by the hand
And led her to her handsome chosen prince
It was all worth the shattered hopes
And dreams in life
To have a fairytale ending in heaven


Comments about Abused Cinderella by Bella Ravenstar

  • Mysterious Person (5/14/2016 1:54:00 AM)


    This poem explains what will truly happen to any girl who lived like Cinderella for Fairy God Mothers don't exist and won't be there in times of help. Truly beautiful. I loved how you made it happy at the end. (Report) Reply

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  • Bernard Snyder (7/24/2015 11:25:00 PM)


    This sounds very much like a movie I would pay to see. Nicely penned with a deep imagination! (Report) Reply

  • Vada Thomas (7/24/2015 2:38:00 PM)


    Well penned. Dreams can be realized in another realm. Thanks for sharing, Perhaps you may enjoy some of my poems. Many blessings, Keep writing, Vada Thomas (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (7/24/2015 12:54:00 AM)


    lovely poem; the story about Cinderella has been my favorite story since childhood. (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2014 3:59:00 AM)


    Highly imaginative and realistic poem and it is wonderfully good in all respects. (Report) Reply

  • Kasey Jessie (5/8/2014 10:32:00 PM)


    could this be made into a movie instead perhaps? (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2012 10:05:00 AM)


    Much much better than the original! ! (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2009 1:38:00 AM)


    WOW, i think that that is all i can say...and thats a good thing trust me! (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2008 11:21:00 AM)


    well..... it is sort of nice. well keep up the gud work Mrs ravenstar (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 2, 2008



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