Achiever Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Achiever
I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
May be it is possible with little support
In case of no moral support what it could be?
Will it be considered as downfall of big tree?
Person who is seized with problems may excel
In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail
Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain
Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain
Person who succeeds is called achiever
Not necessarily he should be firm believer
Should act as master of events and healer
Nothing alters path as ……………….
What are the essential qualities of person?
Should he be master player in all the seasons?
Who can turn the tide and steer the course
Not loosing hope while facing the remorse
Be attentive to others and good listener too
Neither impose will not attempt to woo
Success may have its own way and story
Praises from all thus adding to glory
It’s very hard to pursue goal in adversity
Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity
Bold approach with strong resolve and good quality
Ultimately may earn you respect without any pity
Even what seems to be a difficult task?
Will be made easy and no one may ask
You will have your own way of dealing
Enough energy if required for wound healing
Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal
No one can steal the show or put the seal
At the end of journey, luck may smile
Pain may subside even when you walk for while
it seems as if you vent into your poetry, it's a lovely habit to have, I've noticed that when one vents, the most beautiful words come out
Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain
It’s very hard to pursue goal in adversity Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity Bold approach with strong resolve and good quality Ultimately may earn you respect without any pity...very true...beautifully rhymed...regards...thanks for your wonderful comments
acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support
Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal No one can steal the show or put the seal At the end of journey, luck may smile Pain may subside even when you walk for while Good ending. Unless a commitment to work and taking risk and responsibilities the achievement will not be attained. Good writing. best wishes: Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram.
Person who is seized with problems may excel In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail
I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support In case of no moral support what it could be? Will it be considered as downfall of big tree?
I stongly agree with you that in every success there is a commitment. That is as saying that any honour that involves no risk is not worthy to be called honour.Your poem is an inspirator to those who wishes to excel in life without considering the amount of risk involved. I love this poem.
Yes; that indeed is an achievement! Achieving the unachievable and reaching the unreachable is indeed an ACHIEVEMENT!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support In case of no moral support what it could be?