kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points (Shimla)

After Bath Blues - Poem by kanav justa

I explored everywhere
Yet It wasn’t there
My underwear

It was only old a year
To me it was too dear
I had naught a thing to wear

But when I saw myself in mirror
I could see it clear
My underwear

Comments about After Bath Blues by kanav justa

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/3/2014 1:44:00 PM)

    hahahhahaha! ! ! ! ! ! ...................kanav, you're so versatile! From that serious profile pic of yours, no one can expect, such a piece from you! You really have the guts to post such a piece in public! Here goes 10 for your write.... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,157 Points Valsa George (11/18/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    An interesting poem for a pleasant diversion! Made me chuckle to myself! Such things can happen! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,477 Points * Sunprincess * (11/13/2013 10:23:00 PM)

    I guess the ghost came and visited last night :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Divya Gupta (11/2/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    Hahaha..so, funny.. Keep writing..! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,781 Points Anthony Di''anno (6/21/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    Loved it made me laugh out loud. Nice one kanav :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (6/15/2013 12:45:00 PM)

    hilarious.....i am still laughing....a good write indeed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/9/2013 9:17:00 AM)

    Misplaced articles usually turn up
    where we least expect them.
    This poem made me laugh. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,489 Points Patricia Grantham (6/5/2013 8:56:00 PM)

    A very funny write. We all lay things aside sometimes and
    forget where we put them. A good thing you were not standing
    outside when you forgot it. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,421 Points Valerie Dohren (6/2/2013 9:17:00 AM)

    Was it your birthday suit you saw in the mirror Kanav, or have you just got a bad memory. Amusing write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,673 Points Unwritten Soul (6/1/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    You should put the notice everywhere to remind you! if not you will write another poem, to find your socks and footprints hahahahaha_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,199 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/31/2013 7:48:00 PM)

    myself in mirror, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 1, 2013

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