kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points (Shimla)

A Wish Before Death - Poem by kanav justa

Some sweet night, whilst death finds me
where on earth she be, and if she comes to see
For the last time her touch I will feel
Few pleasing moments from death I will steal
No matter how sore that death will be
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

Embraced within her herself, If she holds me
Gape her through her eyes, if bleak those eyes be
In that small a moment, my whole life I will live
I will ask for something, and wonder if she will give
For the last time, if those lips were near me
If she comes to me I will leave merrily

If my creased hands can move, only one place they will be
Her hands on mine, and only one thing I will see
If the changing time, will alter her whitish skin
For the last time, if my poor hands will win
If in her big eyes, I will still find me
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

I will look her in her eyes, I will look very deep
Just like these days, if she will make me sleep
If few more moments are found by me
In that small a time, I will exist for eternity
For the last time, if my name speaks she
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

Just like in my dreams, if she firmly clutches me
Tell her to come close, her face I will clearly see
For the last time, I will kiss lips of thee
Few blissful moments before my spirit gets free
Tasting sweet her lips, willingly I will flee
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

But if some case be, if she will not hold me
No words if she speaks, and sits like a tree
For the last time, if she still doesn't see
She will still be a princess and I a small bee
And if her sweet voice is not heard by me
But since she comes to me, I will leave merrily


Comments about A Wish Before Death by kanav justa

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (7/11/2014 11:49:00 PM)

    ............honestly this is the best poem I read today....loved reading every single word of this sweet poem.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 313 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/8/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    Truly poetic and very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,429 Points Amitava Sur (2/7/2014 10:55:00 PM)

    A lovely poem with emotions which touches heart with nice flow of woeds (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Bijay Poudel (1/1/2014 11:06:00 PM)

    Made my day...wat a beauty! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (12/26/2013 11:03:00 PM)

    .......beautifuulll kanavv ;) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,989 Points Rajesh Thankappan (12/24/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    A brilliant poem. To sum it up in a few words, I may say it is a 'Taj Mahal 'of verse (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (11/27/2013 5:22:00 PM)

    oh kanav, i love honey bees :) and i love these lines...so beautiful :)
    actually i love the whole poem...this is one of my favourites :)

    ~She will still be a princess and I a small bee
    And if her sweet voice is not heard by me
    But since she comes to me, I will leave merrily~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Morose Mermaid (11/26/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    For the last time her touch I will feel
    Few pleasing moments from death I will steal
    No matter how sore that death will be
    If she comes to me, I will leave merrily
    ... love it... nice write indeed... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,576 Points Lyn Paul (10/31/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    A heartfelt poem with flowing words. The titles is suited perfectly (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,106 Points Patricia Grantham (6/5/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    This is truly a great write. Having to get a wish before death
    is probably one of the most interesting request thats ever known.
    Sometimes death may come so quickly and unexpectedly that
    one can never get a last wish in. You have written a most creditable
    write about ones last wish. Touched my heart dearly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Ruby Mostazir (6/5/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    so emotional it touch my heart.....speechless ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 300 Points Dee Corpolongo (6/3/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    This is a beautifully written and very emotionally felt poem of love....and even so through your last moments~
    Excellent poem and wish...forevermore. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (5/30/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    A very personal poem excellently penned.
    Very moving and emotional. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 543 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/18/2013 12:09:00 AM)

    A few pleasing moments stolen from death you plan to spend with her and then leaving merrily in ecstasy.It's written with an emotional pen. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 963 Points Shahzia Batool (1/23/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    Good comments on a good poem, the unpunctuated flow experiences no ebb, or obstruction anywhere... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,978 Points Valsa George (1/20/2013 12:56:00 AM)

    Overflowing with such intense passion for your sweet heart! Your resolution to love her even if she doesn't turn up to have a last glance at you when you go away is the height of your selfless feel for her! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Neetha Sasidharan (1/17/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    so coollll....grt poem...grt rhymes.....grt idea.....evrything is just grt....kp penning (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (1/1/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    This is an emotion-laden poem. Great work, I like it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (12/31/2012 9:29:00 PM)

    wow this is incredible and fabulous..I love it!
    Happy New Year! may all your dreams and
    wishes come true! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 657 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (12/31/2012 1:04:00 AM)

    A very creditable and moving poem that strikes at the chords of the heart. You have great talent and I'm sure you'll reach great heights in the realm of poetry (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 24, 2012


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