After Death What? Poem by Subbaraman N V

After Death What?

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After Death what? None knows sure on earth
Fear and pain, Death brings to all in mirth
All earned out of tears of others
Journeys never with the Death with feathers!

Then why dishonesty and villainy
In earning wealth that comes not certainly
Be honest and be truthful while earning
Help all in making a happy living!

Sinners prosper never in the long run
Others glitter ever like a strong Sun!
Mother Nature never discreminates
Even the bad, Mother Earth tolerates

Man to learn a lot from Mother Nature
And follow her laws for brighter future!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Weezze ... 03 July 2008

I liked this. Keep writing.

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Rema Prasanna 03 July 2008

Man to learn a lot from Mother Nature And follow her laws for brighter future...... This is a thought rendering write.. a very fine work 10+ Rema

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

the last 2 lines are an eyeopener great poem

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Moushumi moushumi 13 July 2008

you have shared a lot about life without malice by flipping the same coin of death. thanks.

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Gita Ashok 09 June 2010

Then why dishonesty and villainy In earning wealth that comes not certainly Be honest and be truthful while earning Help all in making a happy living! Very well written and how true it is - not just here but all over the world.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 April 2009

Very nice poem

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 20 March 2009

Even though who doesn't believe in God must read about 'Pascal Gamble' and do good works and pray to the God...........If there is existence of the God he will appreciate our work if he doensnt exist we dont loss anything because we are not going to take anything with us after death............. Good Write......10+++

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Vidi Writes 11 January 2009

We studied all through our life Big degrees kept in front Still trying to acquire more of that sort...! If asked a simple question... Whats this life all about? ? Many have blinked and gone. May be this question is one added to that After Death What? A few can think within and think beyond. Happy for that rarity. God Subject.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 September 2008

Very good message but some more could have been written on death before leading to other issues. However, this is a very good poem...9

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Subbaraman N V

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Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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