Subbaraman N V

Rookie - 87 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

A BRIGHT TOMORROW


Amidst
Today's
And till this day's
Pain and pangs
Sufferings and sorrows
Falls and failures
Poverty and penury
I do see a
Silver lining
Bright tomorrow
Absolutely bright
Based purely on
Efforts and efficacy
Of hopes and prayer!
Tomorrow
A bright and prosperous tomorrow
Seen through my inward eyes
And its melodies
Heard through my inward ears!

Submitted: Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, April 19, 2011

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Gita Ashok (6/8/2010 12:35:00 AM)

    Bright tomorrow
    Absolutely bright
    Based purely on
    Efforts and efficacy
    Of hopes and prayer!
    Tomorrow
    A bright and prosperous tomorrow
    Seen through my inward eyes
    And its melodies
    Heard through my inward ears!

    What a strong dose of optimism here! Here's wishing you a great today and:
    'A bright and prosperous tomorrow' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie surya . (7/5/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    a real blessings from a great poet.let it come true as given in this para.
    'A bright and prosperous tomorrow
    Seen through my inward eyes
    And its melodies
    Heard through my inward ears! '
    pl read my a day worth waiting for
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie surya . (7/5/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    a real blessings from a great poet.let it come true as given in this para.
    'A bright and prosperous tomorrow
    Seen through my inward eyes
    And its melodies
    Heard through my inward ears! '
    pl read my a day worth waiting for
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/7/2009 7:03:00 AM)

    yes bright tomorrow is the future of the world........the kingdom of heaven on earth itself.............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vidi Writes (1/10/2009 7:27:00 AM)

    The Hope of Tomorow
    Is the hope of Life.
    Past Lost
    Present doldrums
    Tomorow, the Future which holds.

    In the strength of that Hold
    All desires unfold
    And warms up from Todays Cold.

    Wonderful Subject...
    Thank you dear poet
    For this delight. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (11/29/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    a bright tomorrow is what I now see and hear through your gleaming words
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (8/27/2008 11:51:00 AM)

    Very positive. If there are shadows, there must be a light somewhere
    to create them. May you have many bright tomorrows.Very fine write.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alice Wedderburn (8/7/2008 6:24:00 AM)

    A troulbed world but we live in hope, have faith and keep spreading the word.. a well penned piece! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (7/21/2008 4:36:00 AM)

    With the present political scene in great turmoil, your poem is very relevant to the Indian scene and I hope your thoughts spread the light bright and far to result in good happenings. Thanks for sharing such a wonderfully positive poem. Arya. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ben Gieske (7/16/2008 8:03:00 AM)

    These days it is hard to remain optismistic when so much of our trust is erroded, but the world is filled with plentitude and, thanks to your optimistic view, we are reminded to turn and look again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/10/2008 2:33:00 AM)

    very optimistic well wishing song this one...a poet and his heart never hates. the poem brings out the inner love of the poet towards fellow humans... (Report) Reply

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