~ Al Fresco Imagery ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010
Get lost in
Soul sanctuary
Feel in-built finery
Immerse immix with
Al fresco imagery
Dwindle dope all drudgery.
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Glossary: With humility glossary given for what I tried to express.
Al fresco [Italian] ~ In the open air
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Very expressive! I love your use of many different languages in your poetry, it is very literate! I love the line 'Get lost in soul sanctuary' It is very profound! Thanks so much for sharing... Marina Gasbey...
A lovely and deep write fascinating me as a reader ...many thanks for sharing...Mari
A real hard look at the inner workings of self, is essential. As they say charity begins at home. Nice poetry thanks for sharing
Very nice. Rather simple on the surface, but subtle deeper aim. I like it very well.
What and whose 'truth and freedom' that should 'reign supreme over what is left of the land? ' And, pray tell, what is 'holy basil'? The poem seems to ramble over much terrain so that although one would hope to glean from it, one does get lost. Adeline
Nice, snappy poem assisted by alliteration and rhythms contrasting with traditional, contemplation evoking subject matter. nice poem.
Don't we go beyond all reality and live in that soul sanctuary.
The title of the poem draws the reader in and this finely penned poem holds the reader a willing captive to the very last line. A lovely smooth flow to this well expressed poem! Tfs.............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Celestial message/painting/etching/engraving/sculpting…very economic in words but extended easel with all colors…fantastic…true/tuned vibe caught… 10++ dr.sakti