Members Who Read Most Number Of Poems

(01-06-1988 / shelby)

What do you think this poem is about?

For Example: love, art, fashion, friendship and etc.

All A Dream

a song of purification rip her lips,
like thunder on a mountain,
that whisper oh listen...
thoughts of passion,
past my window
that thumb like red hill and paul,
let me be your intervention,
breath of sinking ships stomping out my breath,
amber of shield,
that gave me my own free will,
I'm am here,
the power of such search light that
clash with the night,
oh were are you? ,
but no sign of my dear
the sun have start to pray on the night,
soon it be sun rise but where is my dear
forever more...,
as seconds turn to hours and days past
i sit around wonder if it all was
a dream.

Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009
Edited: Sunday, June 19, 2011


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Dark Side Of The Moon by Louis Borgo )

Enter the verification code :

  • Nontobeko Dlamini (1/7/2012 11:56:00 AM)

    love da simile in da 2nd line.it creates a vivid image connecting 2 da 1st line. Beautiful poem.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Writing Until My Fingers Bl33d (6/18/2011 7:54:00 PM)

    this is a wonderfully picturesque poem, a lovely read! ! !

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/23/2010 2:14:00 PM)

    Dreams are the stuff of which life is made. Well done my friend.

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/2/2010 8:02:00 AM)

    hey, this one interests me... well it's good!

Read all 4 comments »
[Hata Bildir]