Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 18,563 Points (17.03.1965)

All Innocent - Poem by Lyn Paul

What has gone wrong with the world today?
Fighting, killing, This is not okay
Death for money, religion and greed
Pleasure from seeing people bleed
How can these people not even care
About Innocent lives; it's just so unfair
Will this war ever stop?
How many more bombs will they drop?
Let us hope it will all end soon
And these people will appreciate life's Beautiful Tune

Copyright Reserved May 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: War

Comments about All Innocent by Lyn Paul

  • Gold Star - 19,389 Points Amitava Sur (2/15/2014 2:00:00 AM)

    A nice message, until these devils are off, this earth won't have peace.. let's hope for best.

    You may read my poem Killing myself. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (11/22/2013 5:07:00 AM)

    .. a beautiful message for all us... liked it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (12/13/2012 2:32:00 PM)

    Such a heartfelt poem for peace, a well written hope for the future I`m sure many echo. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (11/15/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    when will it ever answer is when every single family on earth
    starts teaching their children love and to show respect for all of God's
    creations..then we will obtain world peace..beautiful write.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 148 Points Red O'mara (11/6/2012 1:32:00 AM)

    Lovely thought well put, Lyn. Too bad the world's not run by lady poets. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (7/23/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    Short and succinct, very relevant let's hope it will all end soon, very soon! ! Great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 4, 2014

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