Alone And Will Be Poem by Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines

Alone And Will Be

Rating: 5.0


The night is so cool
Sea breeze stroll
Calmness i feel
Peaceful is real

Sitting and still
Thinking like hell
Under the blurry moon
Murmuring alone

Reaching the stars
Watching for hours
Wishing to land
In the palm of my hand

As it slowly fades
Covered with shades
The night turns dark
You see no mark

What's this in my face?
Falling from space
Droplets of tears
Like keeping for years

then, Reminiscing the past
Like days don't last
I stood, head down and still
Crying at the silent hill

At the end of the show
I still don't know
Hearing only the tone
Of forever alone

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
While at my room sitting facing the horizon. The lines just puff in my head.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Written in an exquisite manner..i liked it

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

Thank you for the compliment. I just expressed my feelings every time I'm alone.

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Simon Odhiambo 28 September 2012

good poem. So real and well put.

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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2012

excellent poem/good rhythm and rhyme! ! ! !

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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

an excellent piece, great description of an expressed loneliness, a good read

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Erika Wingo 28 September 2012

What a wonderful poem. I love the rhythym and it's the way it flows together.

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Darkangel Flyfree 28 September 2012

Wow, you expess loneliness so well! Great poem, really enjoyed it!

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Words' Knight 28 September 2012

a perfect song that express the tone of loneness, nice, and bright writting, keep on writting brother.

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Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
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