Allenika ...


Alone on Sea


Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea
Alone i wake up on the sea
Alone i seek out for help
Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food
Alone i drink the salty water
Alone i sit in the cold
Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm
Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea
Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat
Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe
Alone, yes, alone i call out for help
Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat
Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months
Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided
Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the
Guinness World Record for survival at sea

Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006
Edited: Monday, July 19, 2010

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  • Rookie - 58 Points Brian Jani (5/13/2014 12:29:00 PM)

    Allenika Amazing poetic skills here (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Negarin 1401 (9/17/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    love poem..i feel sincerity with it...sea..alone...i live near the sea..nice feeling (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (7/28/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    Alone I will walk
    on my last mile....
    nicely written it reminded me of a movie of Tom Hanks.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (5/1/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    A song on/of solitude. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Slm (12/16/2012 2:55:00 PM)

    This poem reminds me of the movie; The Life Of Pi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Geo Laxman Anand Sai (7/16/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    Alone, yes, alone reveals the Truth (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ledumetse Bakoko (5/17/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    really love this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Russell (4/12/2012 8:04:00 PM)

    I loved this poem it reminds me of a time my friends and I were stuck in Nantucket Sound when we were too young to be out on a sailboat by ourselves. Theres some great original poetry on this website as well http: //www.sharingpoetry.com/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Ddjebarni (3/24/2012 3:05:00 PM)

    waaaaaw amazing words i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Ddjebarni (3/24/2012 3:04:00 PM)

    waaaaw amazing words i realy love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hanyani Ngobeni (2/16/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    alove it, its alsome, fantastic, ecstatic, manufic......alone.........alone indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Jadhav (8/22/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    Well,
    xplaning my situation right now (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Costa Anakiev (8/27/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    Well, it sounds like a song. Well done. Konstantin. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bryan Alexander (8/26/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    beautiful I am not familiar with this mans story and because of you I will (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (8/24/2009 6:59:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with a flow like a song...with surprise in the end..well engraved into experience of survival and loneliness. thanks for sharing!
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zogam Mi (8/7/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    that was so great and so meaningful. let it be keep it! i feel like the poem some time. U are doing well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (1/22/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    wonderful piece of poignace life when reeked by lone pain holding the last end of sraw drownig, yet tear gleans slowly in the eyes as embracing the death slowly in the midst of sea, the eloquience ingenious by the imagery, wellpenned,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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