Senator alufalism

Rookie (Warri delta state, Nigeria)

Alufalism Songs4 **h**u**m**a**n** - Poem by Senator alufalism

HUMAN
The sun is never the perfect gift,
the stars are n't as beautiful as him,
the moon isn't as smooth as we thought,
the lighten is not as fast as we know,
the race isn't for the strong.
HUMAN
the world is not for the rich or the poor,
the skies is more than one,
the earth is full of grace yet we lack unity,
Mankind is one perfect gift,
the creator is more beyond beautiful.


Comments about Alufalism Songs4 **h**u**m**a**n** by Senator alufalism

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (9/16/2012 10:09:00 AM)

    Great flow and connections, and lovely write too. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 36 Points Ebi Robert (8/23/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    Well pening. Well written. Well flowed. A human has known ur poem and has left a comment that says good work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (8/22/2012 6:54:00 PM)

    Deep and Touching! This well crafted and thought provoking write clearly shows your great concern for humanity and also your talent in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bess You! Romeo-NYC
    http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (My Visual Poetry website) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/20/2012 8:47:00 PM)

    mankind is one perfect gift---my favourite line/ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, September 24, 2012


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