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This life is a journey
Over a fire filled path
Like it or not
You have to walk on it! !
With umpteen number of
Blisters and wounds
You have to cross
And end this passage at last.
Though, a bouncy road being laid
With thorns and fire on it.
But alas!
Still we all are running after it
Being totally ignorant about the end.
Licking it and following it
With a hope till the end.
Such an intoxicating narcotic
Is affixed with this life! !
It allures, engulfs
And forces you
To be succumbed at last.
None can avoid
It's killer instinct! !
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Amitava (6.12.2014) 11-20 am
Nice poem or one must say a wisdom poem- You have to end This passage at last. thank you Amitava in my hand only 10 ah so poor I am
This life is a journey Over a fire filled path. I really like these two powerful lines...so very true!
Very true, in spite of all these stumbling blocks in our life, we all are allured to move ahead through all those risky path and at last some where we fall and end. So beautifully expressed. Thank you.
Wow! Such a perfect portrayal of our lives on earth! We go through so much pain and suffering throughout our lives, yet we are reluctant to give it up in hopes of finding something good in it's trials. So true, we numb ourselves somehow and continue living through it. Totally honest and realistic depiction of how we live here on earth, Amitava. Another 10 for sure! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, always enjoy reading your take on life, you have amazing insight into it. RoseAnn
Yes this is life having such a soothing or numbing effect on us yet we love to carry to the last......very beautifully composed...... Amazing piece.....10/10
Yes this is life having such a soothing or numbing effect on us yet we love to carry to the last......very beautifully composed...... Amazing piece.....10/10
Inspite of all adversities, man is zealous to continue his journey throuhg thorn strewn paths! Very few think of leaving the track half way! To me, here lies the beauty of life! A great write, Amitava!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Licking and following it With a hope till the end. Such a narcotic Is affixed with this life! ! A great write..........10