An eye from the sky,
Looks down,
Shines when you smile,
Important to that eye,
Is a rose on the earth,
Wished that eye to be with that rose,
But eyes once open will someday close,
Cheer up friend for that eye's sake,
When you were a child,
Could uttered no words,
She then had the power,
To judge and react,
You cried she cried
You laughed she relieved,
You were her rose you are her sight,
Wishes she not,
Grief, gloom or tears,
Hate in heart or mind full of fears,
So,
Up you stand,
Raise your hand,
To that eye,
Up in the fairyland,
That eye loved and loves your smiles,
She's here with you in all your whiles.
Thank you for this beautiful poem. I don't know whom she lost but I suppose she need time to grieve. My hearts is with her. Maybe one day soon she will discover that your you poem is true. They live in our hearts.
That eye loved and loves your smiles, She's here with you in all your whiles. , , , a great tribute, , , lovelly work
Truely a nice poem to dedicate a personality have a name Sunprinces....Your words make her heart cool& warmth..haha...nice poem
Aha! Many an eye from the west and many more from the east Will read your lines and chime like never before and wonder Here is a poet with a lot to tell us. A good sprout from a unique seed of thought
A well constructed one where U poured your inner out.... As is tradition with U that U always play on words like a jugular and make sheer heaven with its power.... A beautiful thought but the way it is presented made it more fascinating... U gave it an everlasting charm and grandeur... Bravo for! ! !
Sunprincess aka Rachel, i am so happy there are many people here can feel the warm of your sunshine, radiates from your heart...definitely a beautiful poem for a nice person..let me give it 10 for both of you..cheers! ! loved it_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful... remembrance full of light and love!