Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

God's Creation - Poem by Jahan zaib

I think of things without certain things,
Earth without men, kingdoms without kings,
Life without death, white without black,
Day without night, Light without dark,
Young without old, Hot without cold,
Happiness without gloom, spring without fall,
Truth without false, fly without fall,
Rain without dry, earth without sky,
Rich without poor, born without die,
Has God created, Things without value?
Dark has to perish, Spring has to come.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Everything in the universe adds beauty to the other. Just imagine all the people of the world being Bill Gate and then think of the word's skyscrapers. Who would have worked all day to build them? No rich man would have been ready to work in another rich man's Mill.

Comments about God's Creation by Jahan zaib

  • Rookie - 79 Points Alexander Coppedge (8/4/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    Almost sound like heaven except for the light and darkness These were the eternal waters Everything else is in the kingdom Excellent work with wonderful talent displays (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 524 Points Vizard Dhawan (12/6/2012 11:10:00 AM)

    nice and heart felt poem..it made my heart melt..so true and passonate..what a creation..! ! ! ! ! really praiseworthy..showing incomparable talent...hats off (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,689 Points * Sunprincess * (11/14/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    by having a complete opposite..then you have a choice
    as to which you like better..as God and heaven has an
    opposite also.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,327 Points Saadat Tahir (10/24/2012 5:31:00 PM)

    very nice and musical....goes flawlessly until the last line..where the rhyme could be improved...
    loved reading it...
    cheers

    sat (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shivani Misra (10/24/2012 10:26:00 AM)

    Wow :) this was an awesome piece. Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (10/24/2012 10:23:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem, if people looked at the value of life
    and not the value of what they own the world would
    be a better place. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,068 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/24/2012 3:45:00 AM)

    Life is bi-polar. The world is full of opposites. Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,667 Points Hazel Durham (10/24/2012 3:05:00 AM)

    Great rhythm and flow, a very wise poem, beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (10/23/2012 12:41:00 PM)

    nice write buddy... The idea is conveyed beautifully... Often people think of such things and groan about... God moves in mysterious ways... Here in this poem U helped interpreting the universe.... these variations and differences are the beauties of the universe and without them life wu be dull and monotonous... Keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,220 Points Sallam Yassin (10/23/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    god's creations as couple
    we exist
    wise and sound man
    god bless u (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 25, 2012


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