God's Creation Poem by Jahan Zeb

god's creations as couple we exist wise and sound man god bless u

nice write buddy... The idea is conveyed beautifully... Often people think of such things and groan about... God moves in mysterious ways... Here in this poem U helped interpreting the universe.... these variations and differences are the beauties of the universe and without them life wu be dull and monotonous... Keep it up

Great rhythm and flow, a very wise poem, beautiful write!

Life is bi-polar. The world is full of opposites. Good poem

A fantastic poem, if people looked at the value of life and not the value of what they own the world would be a better place.

a rewarding read - -rewarding in every way

Life without death, white without black, Day without night, Light without dark, Young without old, Hot without cold, Happiness without gloom, spring without fall, playing with the contrasts is an age old technic in Literature.... you have wonderfully made it in this poem.. thank u for the noble thoughts.. thank u. tony

Almost sound like heaven except for the light and darkness These were the eternal waters Everything else is in the kingdom Excellent work with wonderful talent displays

nice and heart felt poem..it made my heart melt..so true and passonate..what a creation..! ! ! ! ! really praiseworthy..showing incomparable talent...hats off

very nice and musical....goes flawlessly until the last line..where the rhyme could be improved... loved reading it... cheers sat