And The Cute Was Dead Poem by Khalid Saifullah

And The Cute Was Dead

Rating: 5.0


The Bad time never informs us of arrival,
Sometimes we become so much care less,
Particularly in a house where there are the kids,
We need to be more than careful my friends,

The mobile charger was plugged on in the socket
The cute little baby put the charger in her mouth,
And she died of electric shock she'll not come back,
Hope my friends may be careful in future!

Friday, February 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: regret
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 February 2015

It is very sad poem having a warning to young mass to maintain discipline. Beautiful composition.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2015

A great message.........................10

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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

The Bad time never informs us of arrival, Sometimes we become so much care less, ...a reminder for all...nice

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Valsa George 27 February 2015

So sad.... We never anticipate such a thing! Let this poem help parents to take sufficient precaution! A moving write!

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Kavya . 03 March 2015

yeah heard of this instance recently n it sent shivers in my spine....yes some things go un-noticed and are totally un-intentional....to become the reason for taking away the life of a toddler

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 September 2018

sad but many mothers are careless as they can't visualise what can happen do read my two poems moms smiles and mothers day today u will recall

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Susan Williams 30 July 2018

This is a valuable write- we forget what we use so much and we must not forget or we shall lose a lovely child. Valuable write. I liked your creative use of The Cute as a way to describe as well as name the child. These children could and should be called The Cute! Excellent word choice.

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Susan Williams 30 July 2018

It is a wonder that more children do not die from household accidents- as best as Mothers and Fathers watch over them, they always find that timy crack in our protectiveness- - I was fortunate that my children survived their behavior- -yet they still roll their eyes when remembering how protective I was [they called it overly-protective! ! ! ]

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 April 2018

A poignant write with great message. A very thoughtful poem.

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2018

well, normally i would not use cute as a noun as you seem to have done. but poetic license is useful. and it The Cute Was DID help catch my attention. bri :)

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