Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 3 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

And The Ocean Created A Man - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

When the whims to ‘feel', swam in ocean's streams
An amoeba sprang from it, just to roll and dream.

When a wish to swim, surfed on his azure heart
His womb gorged out, fishes, reptiles and sharks.

When a fancy to fly, troubled his deep abyss
The birds flew from it, just to circle the sky in bliss.

When, masochism flashed in his greenish eyes
And emotions' tsunami bubbled in the waves;
His heart yearned to be exploited and to be lied
And men arose from it, just to punish the slave.


Comments about And The Ocean Created A Man by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (9/13/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    beautifully crafted piece..amazing words and brilliant pinning great sir (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 613 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/11/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    A well knitted poem in content and form. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,283 Points Shahzia Batool (5/17/2013 1:04:00 AM)

    deep poem with a melodramatic element and a vision! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,279 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/9/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    The birds flew to circle the sky in bliss. good one.
    I invite you tom read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 9, 2013


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