Ruby Honeytip

Rookie - 38 Points (1970)

And What's It Gonna Be Boy?


You sprinkle yourself inside me
With every comment,
With every intercourse of feeling
With every giggle you pull from me.
You make me love myself,
Because I see myself in you.
If you don't desire me,
If I never make your hands shake,
When I'm close,
Really close....
Then it's time now
To step back
And save my heart
Like a hero.

I'll let you sleep on it.

© 2012

Submitted: Saturday, November 10, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, November 27, 2012

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Comments about this poem (And What's It Gonna Be Boy? by Ruby Honeytip )

  • Rookie Alla Simone (12/3/2012 4:59:00 PM)

    Then it's time now
    To step back
    And save my heart
    Like a hero.
    That's my favorite line. But captivating throughout. Excellent ending. I want a sequel! lol Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aria Siren (11/28/2012 11:59:00 AM)

    Well Miss Honeytip-this is one of my first introductions to your poetry and I love it. I love your signature endings-they are like a shock back to reality after getting lost in your thoughts. You are fabulous!
    Favourite line:

    You make me love myself,
    Because I see myself in you.

    Btw thanks Stevie for the recommendation in poetic form :) you were right, she's great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (11/24/2012 1:54:00 AM)

    This is another brilliant poem! Extremely well done! Gosh if he wasn't sure before, he will be after reading this! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Red O'mara (11/12/2012 6:14:00 AM)

    Lots of emotions there, Ruby. Stirring poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,302 Points Lyn Paul (11/11/2012 4:17:00 PM)

    Excellent Ruby and I know the song well. I'll give you the answer in the morning... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (11/11/2012 12:10:00 PM)

    Inspired by an old Meatloaf song: -) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,115 Points Thomas A Robinson (11/11/2012 4:32:00 AM)

    hnnnnnnm, another one of those girlfriend poems that the boy doesn't get or gets too late and ruins the whole day,
    weekend, week, whatever just when he thinks everything is going perfectly. (Report) Reply

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