Atonement. Poem by Fay Slimm

Atonement.

Rating: 5.0


When neglect has
.......................... riven trust,
.................................... despair wins.


Hurt and damaged
.......................... core needs
................................. heart restorer.


Harmony, now
........................ re-installed,
.............................reconcile begins.


With appeasement
.................. love can bloom
....................................... as before.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 19 October 2009

Your short usage of words described something beautiful.

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Bob Gibson 09 October 2009

No questions asked, there are no lies, a masquerade of human sighs if only, why not me! the questions of eternity for a brief spell gold is found, noticed by those around , an inward smile, a secret cast, a reason, a season, may it last

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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