Fay Slimm

Rookie - 20 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Tribute To Love. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Love is the composite
................ of many fine traits,
With finesse drawn from caring,
.....................by small acts
Toward hurt hearts.

............Love always intiates
Qualities like gentle
............... compassion, factual
Usage of such gives results
.........without scheming.

Love heals sick minds when
.............. even an enemy
Counts enough to disarm anger
.............. from feelings
Rank with hostility..........

.......... Love will defend
Most selfishness,
................. injecting hope into
Those with need.
....moreover love feeds kindness
...............................libera lly.

Love you are mighty,
............................. from you
Pours the best medicine
...........this world
........................ will ever find.


Comments about Tribute To Love. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (9/6/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    I would certainly have to agree with you here my dear! A sweet tribute to love.

    Power to the force

    Smiling at you

    Tai (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Beauty Philosophy (9/5/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    A nice tribute to love, well-expressed and well-penned...have a look at my rational approach of love in my poem 'Is romantic love that necessary? ' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Georgia Girl (8/25/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful write, with all the intricate details of loves power and strengths...I like this...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (8/25/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    A beautifully expressed tribute to love, it does make the world go round, we all need to be loved by someone,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (8/25/2009 3:40:00 AM)

    hmmmmm..this is nice, , tribute to love, , this is nice ha..we should have to give tribute to love...coz wthout love..nothing will be here.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (8/23/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    Thoughts to live by... thought provoking sentiments! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (8/23/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    You speak the language of love with grace and eloquence.
    A classic perfomance from a poetess who is
    more than worthy of the name.

    Love,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie T S (8/22/2009 6:25:00 AM)

    Astounding amazing Poem Fay
    Beautifully crafted
    10 plus from me
    Tracy x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/21/2009 11:41:00 PM)

    a beautiful tribute...yes love is not a schemer....love is the one and only remedy we have for all our problems....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Randy Hogan (8/20/2009 4:32:00 PM)

    oh! sweet flower
    so true.....
    the Love you give is pure
    and I hold to my heart so truly
    I could Love for the rest of my life.
    I would only a grain sand
    next to you!

    hugssssss
    and kisses
    Randy~*~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Smiley Hooker (8/19/2009 8:16:00 PM)

    Yes, i do agree and i so love this, dear Fay...love is the best medicine...so effective to heal the pains of a broken heart. thanks for sharing this beautiful write.
    take care...hugs & kisses...Smiley (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (8/19/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    A fine description of love..... well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (8/18/2009 1:07:00 AM)

    Very nicely n tenderly expressed, fay; in short, love is God? ? ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/17/2009 4:06:00 PM)

    You dragged me to search for the missing words.I find comfort at the end of those lines.Very stylish Fay.World's famous subject. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/16/2009 5:20:00 PM)

    A Fantastic tribute to a common theme we always love to write about...10+++ Many many thanks...........: 0) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (8/16/2009 11:45:00 AM)

    Lovingly expressed Fay my friend....on a topic many can relate to....Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us....10+++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (8/12/2009 11:19:00 PM)

    When love falls apart, and hearts they are broken
    where once there was music, now no words are spoken
    that love is not lost, its repairing your heart
    healing the wounds, to make a new start

    without love this would be a sad world indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/12/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    i needed to read this piece.. fantastic the way you put it. thanks fay. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (8/12/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    'Love'ly tribute indeed....and Amen.
    Cheers.
    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Susan Jarvis (8/11/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    Fay, this poem sums up the purity of love that so many seek and so few find. It's heart-rending and beautiful. You certainly know the meaning of the word love, and the title is befitting. S :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 25, 2011


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