john tiong chunghoo

Bronze Star - 2,468 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Autumn Sonata: Celebrating Love - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

love was the lake in your two eyes
which you afforded me to swim in
taking me whole into your cherish
our joy jumped like fishes in spring waters
love is the road we have both vowed
to take hand in hand, heart to heart
spring, summer, autumn and winter
breathing in each other's breath
surviving on each other's strengths
and weaknesses taking challenges
like roses that bow and dance in the winds
love will be the maple each autumn paints
to celebrate a love tale in red blood passion
before they trail into divinity hands whispering
and sighing for an eternal blessing the joy of
two fishes jumping in spring waters


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  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (9/25/2008 10:57:00 AM)

    Nothing like fishes jumping (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 25, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 27, 2008


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