On hearing the sound of warm water flushing
The scents of the Orient into my bath,
I fill with elation, my cheeks begin blushing
With anticipation. - My Bathtime is back!
Weekly this ritual replaces showering.
The bliss of the soak begins luring again.
Sensual urges for splashing start flowering,
With waterfalls running through fingers, like rain.
The wonder of moments with sponge making bubbles
Means liquidy heaven approaches once more.
Irresistible magic floats away any troubles.
Caresses await as I now close the door.
Truly its a bliss especially when you share the bath with a loved one. A 10.
how refreshing thereafter..and inviting...for the TLC (tender loving care) and caresses..there will be...nice tempting write... Ency Bearis
Hi Fay. Theres nothing like a nice hot bath and when you can have one in rhyme so much the better. another great read. **10** Regards Dave T.
Your not in hot water with this one fay, great soak, I mean write.10 Tom
Women do love their bubble baths, Fay, and no male with a brain would be stupid enough to begrudge them that wonderfuly re-invigorating pleasure. After all, many a male has learned that his love's fascination with long, leisurely hot bath often proves quite beneficial to him afterwards! One thing men enjoy is showering together with a lover and playing that wonderfully inspiring game of soaping up each other all over. That little game has led to many pleasures! But I am drifting from the point of your lovely poem-how delightful it is to get away from it all for an hour or so, luxuriating in the aromas and bubbles of long and lovely old fashioned bath. What a marvelllous and enchanting poem this is, Fay! Carl.
Kudos Fay! I love it. One of lifes great pleasures you bring to paper. (Or something like paper)
OH this sounds so relaxing, Except I would have Lavender! ! LOL.. Very nice feel and anticipation of how good my bath will feel tonight! ! Excellent! ! Bonnie
That friday night bath, in four inches of water my wife went in first followed close by our daughter lingering woman, the bath they did hug cold water for dad, but in bed was a hug!
A 'clean' hint of eroticism...lurking.....here....somewhere...methinks! Enticing......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant Fay can't beat a good old soak inthe tub, showers are only fun if theres two 10 Chris x