Nia Schexnider


Beautiful - Poem by Nia Schexnider

He makes me smile,
...for a while.
He makes me cheerful
...instead of fearful.

But I am no goddess,
And I am not modest.

I take his affection,
but give no detection,
of my intention to leave,
And I let him believe.

That I will be there,
That I will care,
That I am the only one,
But I was just having my fun.

'She is so bitter! '
But I'm not a quitter.
I never gave up my fight.
I loved him into the night.

I loved him all the day long,
I let love sing it's song,
But when it was time for the end,
I did not pretend.

And I left him with a smile,
That he kept for a while.


Comments about Beautiful by Nia Schexnider

  • Silver Star - 4,189 Points Tiku . (6/1/2015 12:34:00 PM)

    Nice poem of love.Flow and wordplay is nice too.Liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/14/2014 2:48:00 PM)

    i love the rhyme and the flow, it feels to melt into one
    and the poem so good, smooth, sweet and beautiful
    good work indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,424 Points Khairul Ahsan (6/7/2014 10:13:00 PM)

    Your 'Beautiful' is a beautiful poem.
    It seems the parting was not too bad, the end came on a cheerful note.
    The poem has a good, natural flow. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Abhinit Chute (abz) (5/27/2014 9:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem.. it was flowing when I went through..! Good job (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,171 Points Herbert Guitang (4/25/2014 1:44:00 AM)

    Very loving and beautiful poems (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 26, 2014


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