akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

Big Bang - Poem by akram saqib

Thrashes and bash
Your thoughts rash
Creep into heart
Bang with crash


Explode in feelings
To create commotions
Heart rises healing
Super flow emotions

When the dusts settle
A pang like thing
Increase and rattler
Make me sing

The songs of rubble
Lyrics of pains
Odes of trouble
Epics of remains

The star which awakes
Tide of agony
With quietness slakes
Marring my destiny

I revolve around
Round the axis
Never on ground
Land and relaxes


Comments about Big Bang by akram saqib

  • Rookie Sad _eyes (4/13/2009 3:29:00 AM)

    A healthy choice in words and i really admire that.. We are going to get along just fine i rate this at 25 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Identification Accepted (4/12/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    loved reading this 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shams Tahir (4/8/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    without the knowlege of the poet there exploded something and he started revolving around his love.good idea and good comparison. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (4/6/2009 9:56:00 AM)

    Caught unawares as always is the way these things work. Ëxplode in feelings', the things is to make the fireworks keep exploding. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ata khan (4/5/2009 2:09:00 AM)

    Bravo! Akram
    Thanks for Sharing

    10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 5, 2009



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