akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

///Mother - Poem by akram saqib

The beauty of butter flies
The freshness of flowers
In you alone lies
The passionate powers
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The shining of the gold
The softness of petals
Firm determination
in your bosom rattles
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The height of mountains
The colors of rainbow
The light of your love
Keep every body glow
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Understanding of a friend
Brightness of stars
Guidance of a sincere leader
Are just your metaphors
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beauty, freshness and love
height glory and shine
you bestow on your child
like that of spirits divine
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Collecting such loving traits
Nature does mother creates


Comments about ///Mother by akram saqib

  • Gold Star - 35,295 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    The beauty of butter flies
    The freshness of flowers
    In you alone lies
    The passionate powers.... it is only in you mother and no other....10

    i wrote O, mother pse read it also (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Vinod Ak (5/29/2009 11:45:00 PM)

    'Collecting such loving traits
    Nature does mother creates'
    Lovely poetry!
    Fabulous expression!
    10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 1:28:00 PM)

    Stunning - 10+++

    'Collecting such loving traits
    Nature does mother creates' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Lalitha iyer (5/13/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    Very lovely poem, Mother is an eternal weakness or rather say eternal strength. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/12/2009 1:37:00 PM)

    Nothing in the world better than good old MOM. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,295 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/12/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    it is beautiful poem. noi words will suffice the need. it is very good dear. read mine also 'O, mother'. you may find some similarity., , ,10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malcolm The Last. (5/12/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful use of imagery.........
    perfect feeling of harmony and humility........
    Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich2 (5/12/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    A nice poem that nbeeds a bit of chiseling. Rattle is too rattly for the spirit of the poem.

    H (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Nkwocha (5/12/2009 6:59:00 AM)

    A beautiful write. Thanks be to God for the gift of our mothers. well penned 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melissa Thompson (5/12/2009 6:47:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful tribute to all mothers. you have capture the thoughts of so many children in your poem...well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (5/12/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem
    top marks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 387 Points Marie Shine (5/12/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem and loving tribute to a much loved Mother from her well loved Son. Very well written with lovely contrasting imagery. A 10 from me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 411 Points Ency Bearis (5/12/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    a nice tribute..well written for the Mothers... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (5/12/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    a very nice piece dear..mothers are our best friends..they know best next to God..be lated happy greetings for your mother..naizz (Report) Reply

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