The beauty of butter flies
The freshness of flowers
In you alone lies
The passionate powers
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The shining of the gold
The softness of petals
Firm determination
in your bosom rattles
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The height of mountains
The colors of rainbow
The light of your love
Keep every body glow
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Understanding of a friend
Brightness of stars
Guidance of a sincere leader
Are just your metaphors
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beauty, freshness and love
height glory and shine
you bestow on your child
like that of spirits divine
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Collecting such loving traits
Nature does mother creates
wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem
wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem
it is beautiful poem. noi words will suffice the need. it is very good dear. read mine also 'O, mother'. you may find some similarity., , ,10
Heartfelt tribute to a loving mum elegantly brought forth with thankful heart and glorifying tongue. Beautiful flow of thoughts ceremoniously rich in tone. Thanks for sharing Akram and do remain enriched.
very beautiful Motherly poem u may read mine MOM'S SMILES you will surely like it
Firm determination in your bosom rattles beauty, freshness and love height glory and shine you bestow on your child like that of spirits divine beautiful description of your experience of t he mothers never ending love beautifully penned dear poet. Thank you ver ymuch for this poem. tony
The height of mountains The colors of rainbow The light of your love Keep every body glow... yes, mother's love is most powerful and lovely like mountain and rainbow. Nice collocation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.
wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem