Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 10,451 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Broken Wings - Poem by Amitava Sur

With bits & pieces step by step,
We've knitted a happy small nest.
My beloved and I, on this earth
Made a small heaven - in fact.
We were Dancing, cooing & singing in nights
In side that cuckoo's nest.

Life was flowing smoothly so nice,
Merrily … as the butterflies,
It was like a rainbow in the sky
With colors & luster
So happy were we! !

A gusty storm in between,
Shook away in a stormy day.
The lovely nest along with my love -
Was brutally ruined and snatched away.
The heaven on earth what we made -
That paradise was lost as such.
With a wounded heart
And the broken wings -
Now, I am deserted on a sandy bay.

Sitting alone on the river bank -
Saw the dying sun was setting down.
I saw a new piece of land -
Rising afresh on the river bed.

With the heavy heart, I could read...
Time and tide wait for none,
One will perish and other will come.

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Amitava (4.5.2013)


Comments about Broken Wings by Amitava Sur

  • Veteran Poet - 1,646 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/27/2015 8:59:00 AM)

    Mirror images cannot show the soul of a man...the best part of a man is within!
    Dorothy Alves Holmes
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  • Veteran Poet - 1,646 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/27/2015 8:58:00 AM)

    Mirror images cannot capture the soul of a man...the best part of a man is within!
    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Danielle Elsworth (2/12/2015 1:21:00 PM)

    This poem touched my heart and tells exactly how I feel right now. Amore questa poesia così tanto il mio caro amico (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,191 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/9/2014 3:36:00 PM)

    Simply profound and thought provoking, you have found your way through poetry!
    Totally love your poetry Amitava! You are another guiding light through sorrow's
    depths. Thank you. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/20/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    Awesome and Thought provoking! Your Broken Wings as different as mine as they may look, they are still Broken Wings patiently waiting to be healed! Well crafted and touching with a nice flow! 10+++ Well deserved! You have clearly shown to the Poetry World your Talent and sensitivity as a human being! Thanks for sharing and keep it up my dear brother and the Almighty Bless You! Peace and Love for always! Regards from New York City www.romeodellavalle.com (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -2 Points Ibnu Din Assingkiri (10/4/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    true reflection of life. good write. I drift along the words' flow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, February 13, 2015


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