Thampi KEE

Bronze Star - 2,127 Points (kerala India)

Budha Is Laughing - Poem by Thampi KEE

You praise my strength,
my fun for the war, ...
the huge wound in
my head yet to heal....

You praise my strength
my son is my power
his muscle on his arm
burning for war

We crushed smiling Buddha
with version of one eye,
utterly without scent..
the eye simply for mind,

You raped my faith
and forced for purdha..
you raped my sister,
for the sake of your faith

you made this land
and famine was the end,
any more than gray old horse
we meet in the holy place


Comments about Budha Is Laughing by Thampi KEE

  • Gold Star - 9,187 Points Madathil Rajendran Nair (4/29/2015)

    Congrats for capturing the home page. I have already commented about this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 19,977 Points Kim Barney (4/28/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    Is it Budha with one D or Buddha with two? You have it one way in the title and the other way in the poem. I spelled it with two in my Buddha poem.
    Enjoyed reading it in any case. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (4/28/2015 10:05:00 AM)

    A Fantastic write once again from your pen. Sure, Budha will be Laughing by not looking at the poem, but the way you have presented the truth in a beautiful way. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.
    Congrats for well deserved poem of the day! (Report) Reply

    Bronze Star - 2,127 Points Kee Thampi (4/29/2015 5:46:00 AM)

    Thanks for the love of war against terrorism

  • Silver Star - 3,852 Points John Richter (4/28/2015 6:20:00 AM)

    This tells a horrible story... I think.... Is this Budha that is so callous? I guess my ignorance precludes my understanding of your faith's entirety. But I feel like 'crushing the one eyed Budha' represents crushing a mindset, perhaps a peoples will.... In any event, fantastic poetry friend.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,911 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (4/28/2015 12:53:00 AM)

    Meaning of laughing is much more than literary. It looks like a knock on the head by a great teacher. Very meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,251 Points Kelly Kurt (4/11/2015 11:11:00 PM)

    Laughing or crying? Thank you for sharing, Thampi
    Peace (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,187 Points Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/21/2015 8:55:00 PM)

    World's indignation very effectively presented! (10) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,751 Points Salini Nair (11/18/2014 3:02:00 AM)

    amazing write.....enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bijaylaxmi Sarangi (5/5/2010 6:26:00 AM)

    Wow, great one.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandhya S N (7/16/2009 3:27:00 AM)

    meaningful words
    regards
    sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Lyday (5/13/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    An interesting perspective on Budhism. Good write. I will think about it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C.H. Seow (12/1/2008 12:31:00 AM)

    interesting piece..i'm a Buddhist myself and it really does have an impact.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/7/2008 3:26:00 AM)

    omg...that leaves a deep impact in the mind of the readers... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/19/2008 3:28:00 AM)

    Marvellous composition, love it.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanwaya Njaaneya (9/7/2008 11:18:00 PM)

    enligtening the conscience.....................good work.......... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 968 Points C. P. Sharma (5/13/2008 1:19:00 AM)

    I loved your 'Budha is laughing'. What an effective poetic satire on what man has made of Man. You have put all your wit in it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rema Prasanna (4/28/2008 12:58:00 AM)

    A meaningful poem...... good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Minnu Serah (4/7/2008 5:07:00 AM)

    wow, too nice...um, kol-lam... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (9/20/2007 2:27:00 AM)

    yeah, buddha is laughing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raveendran . (5/8/2007 7:15:00 AM)

    know the strength of his smile. nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 23, 2006



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