Bow and arrow
Is too complicated
To kill me
Your eyes
Are enough
To do that!
A short and.lovely composition.Eyes speak thousands times more than the lips.Sure a loving glance from the sweet beloved can kill.Thanks for sharing.
A very powerful word picture, Vijay. And then even more surprising that it's about love. I'm wondering how you came across me and why you specifically asked me to read your poem...?
Dear Vijai Sai, What Shakespeare said about eyes in Love's Labours Lost comes back to my mind. Did not the heavenly rhetoric of thine eye, Missiles from eyes are sharper! ‘Gainst whom the world can not hold argument, - -W.S.
Waooo...Killer eyes... And this explains your deep love towards your beloved...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice one Vijay Sai...