Ajay Srivastava

Gold Star - 8,420 Points (28/08/1964 / new delhi)

Can You - Poem by Ajay Srivastava

Sun is in full form bright shine.



Sun want to say 'can you shine like me'.



Suddenly electrifying ray appeared from dark cloud. Electrifying converted entire atmosphere. Can you change atmosphere like me.



It start raining, people come out from home & there thrill is watching.



Rain in itself, feel is so proud.

rain is 'asking can you show thrill' like me.



In a few second a half circle appeared in the sky.



Oh it's rainbow & want to say i am simply colorful.



Tiny boys playing with water, there innocent smile on there faces.



These little boys are in there heaven.

Topic(s) of this poem: desire


Comments about Can You by Ajay Srivastava

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/28/2015 10:14:00 AM)

    Verily, everyone is able to do something,
    A lovely poem with lovely imagery. (Report) Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (10/27/2015 7:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful narration and flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015



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