jian liying


(Cantonese poem) 浪淘沙 大雨 - Poem by jian liying

大雨落身边,
声浪滔天,
佛山城内几十年,
家下低迷声不断,
唔识去边!< br>
革命要争先,
瘦马挥鞭!
街头湿尽是诗篇。
忍忍埋埋心情乱,
淋下雨添!

(依首系粤语诗)


Comments about (Cantonese poem) 浪淘沙 大雨 by jian liying

  • Gold Star - 31,466 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/1/2014 9:08:00 AM)

    congratulation my dear poet, But I failed to understand, it is my fault. I am far from this language. (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 48 Points Jian Liying (6/1/2014 9:33:00 AM)

    This is in Cantonese language, I have an English one show above, thank you!

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 1, 2014


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