Spring Poem by jian liying

Spring

Rating: 4.0


The cold breath of spring,
green and yellow colors mixed,
for a long time and looking at it.

cold rain falling,
shoes and clothing were wet,
the lantern lighted still,
day wore away...
My spring,
in the world, the lonesomest thing.

Friday, May 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Donnie Wolff 22 August 2014

I like this a lot, thank you

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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

A lovely poem but I try to look at Spring as a new beginning. A fresh start.

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