jian liying

Spring - Poem by jian liying

The cold breath of spring,
green and yellow colors mixed,
for a long time and looking at it.

cold rain falling,
shoes and clothing were wet,
the lantern lighted still,
day wore away...
My spring,
in the world, the lonesomest thing.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Spring by jian liying

  • Bronze Star - 2,606 Points Donnie Wolff (8/22/2014 11:54:00 AM)

    I like this a lot, thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (5/2/2014 7:17:00 AM)

    A lovely poem but I try to look at Spring as a new beginning. A fresh start. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, May 2, 2014

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