Captain Death Poem by Ted Sheridan

Captain Death

Rating: 4.8


His mind has become a violent storm
where thoughts collide like wind driven rain
and major flashes of brilliance are foretold
by the loud thunderous sound of his rage___
He sees not the rocks beneath the waves
nor does he heed the flight of seabirds
towards the dry land of peaceful sanity___
His mind has become a violent storm
wherein we his faithful and loyal crew
are all destined to be lost at sea.....


2007 ©Ted Sheridan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 27 September 2008

My 10 for this beautiful poem.

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Melvina Germain 12 July 2007

Yes we are the ones that suffer, well done Ted.--Melvina--

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Eerily synchronistic.....

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Dee Daffodil 16 February 2007

So nicely written Ted...I love the imagery...I can see him standing on that cliff... Hugs, Dee

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