Catch If You Can Poem by Valsa George

Catch If You Can

Rating: 5.0


Far away, from the rim of the Earth
Beyond the oceans,
Beyond human reach,
Into the aerial pockets of the blue,
On wings I have soared
To always watch you from above!
I am now one with the stars
Floating in ether like a mysterious sprite

Here where I dwell unseen
Is a land beyond all cares
Here is such lively luminousness
And such cheerful blaze
Flickers of flame all around
Scintillating spheres, cherubs on wings
And the Garden of Eden
Where love is a timeless theme
And where blooms a million stars

(I try to forget your eyes,
Two pools of brimming pain
As I broke through the clouds into the sky)

It is spring time here
As promised,
I shall pluck down a star for you
I will fling it across the blue
Catch it if you can
And keep it as your own

Let it shine in your eye
And mirror the blue sky
Where I shall script the code of love
Too deep to decipher, my dove!

Monday, August 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 August 2014

a fantasy but aren't these dreams real!

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Lyn Paul 25 August 2014

A beautiful Imaginary write Valsa with a very suited title. Thank You

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2014

Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! - - - - -fantastic lines.

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Dinesan Madathil 25 August 2014

If someone tries to catch you, your world will cease to be there. So let none catch you at all and you be there in this explosion of this imaginative flutter par excellent the Big Bang. Good poetry has no boundaries and the poets thereof travel beyond the time and the space. Madam Valsa, it is a fine poem with its intricacy of thread!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 August 2014

Great imagery scripted with wonderful words and lines......Valsa....as usual the best...........

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

It is spring time here As promised, I shall pluck down a star for you I will fling it across the blue Catch it if you can And keep it as your own.....outstanding.expression of love. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 01 July 2018

Love the title and I love this very creative and superb write that is original and takes the readers into a paradise of another world where love never dies! I wonder if you have some spare time could you comment on my poem 'Reckless Words' please

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Ramesh Rai 04 September 2014

Peak of your imagination is And the Garden of Eden Where love is a timeless theme And where blooms a million stars Beautiful and fantastic write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

A lovely love poem. I couldn't catch it, as it was scripted with codes of love..I loved the lines..... Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! Let this poem fly freely, soaring into great heights. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 August 2014

Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! A beautiful poem.

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