Valsa George


Catch If You Can - Poem by Valsa George

Far away, from the rim of the Earth
Beyond the oceans,
Beyond human reach,
Into the aerial pockets of the blue,
On wings I have soared
To always watch you from above!
I am now one with the stars
Floating in ether like a mysterious sprite

Here where I dwell unseen
Is a land beyond all cares
Here is such lively luminousness
And such cheerful blaze
Flickers of flame all around
Scintillating spheres, cherubs on wings
And the Garden of Eden
Where love is a timeless theme
And where blooms a million stars

(I try to forget your eyes,
Two pools of brimming pain
As I broke through the clouds into the sky)

It is spring time here
As promised,
I shall pluck down a star for you
I will fling it across the blue
Catch it if you can
And keep it as your own

Let it shine in your eye
And mirror the blue sky
Where I shall script the code of love
Too deep to decipher, my dove!


Comments about Catch If You Can by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 17,695 Points Ramesh Rai (9/4/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Peak of your imagination is
    And the Garden of Eden
    Where love is a timeless theme
    And where blooms a million stars
    Beautiful and fantastic write. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2014 1:11:00 PM)

    A lovely love poem. I couldn't catch it, as it was scripted with codes of love..I loved the lines.....

    Let it shine in your eye
    And mirror the blue sky
    Where I shall script the code of love
    Too deep to decipher, my dove!

    Let this poem fly freely, soaring into great heights. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,170 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/28/2014 12:47:00 PM)

    Let it shine in your eye
    And mirror the blue sky
    Where I shall script the code of love
    Too deep to decipher, my dove!
    A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 937 Points Queeny Gona (8/26/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    A love poem and seems to be a dedication to your beloved dear mam!

    I loved the way, you opened the scene and ended in brevity!

    Holding the pain and trying to color it with love to live happy! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 105 Points Sultan Mahmud (8/26/2014 5:02:00 AM)

    Let it shine in your eye
    And mirror the blue sky
    Where I shall script the code of love
    Too deep to decipher, my dove!

    Nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,448 Points Amitava Sur (8/26/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    Reading those lovely soothing lines I feel myself to be there ......... the calmness guides me to write....

    Picking some flowers of love and peace -
    Being scattered in that holy place ..... very nice Valsa (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,322 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/25/2014 5:06:00 PM)

    I shall pluck down a star for you
    I will fling it across the blue
    Catch it if you can
    And keep it as your own
    Will stay alert to catch it. You went into the blue sky and reached the limits of the stars in this poem. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,753 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/25/2014 12:46:00 PM)

    Great imagery scripted with wonderful words and lines......Valsa....as usual the best........... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (8/25/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    If someone tries to catch you, your world will cease to be there. So let none catch you at all and you be there in this explosion of this imaginative flutter par excellent the Big Bang.
    Good poetry has no boundaries and the poets thereof travel beyond the time and the space.
    Madam Valsa, it is a fine poem with its intricacy of thread! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (8/25/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    Let it shine in your eye
    And mirror the blue sky
    Where I shall script the code of love
    Too deep to decipher, my dove! - - - - -fantastic lines. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,537 Points Lyn Paul (8/25/2014 6:44:00 AM)

    A beautiful Imaginary write Valsa with a very suited title. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (8/25/2014 4:28:00 AM)

    It is too pleasingly deep to decipher and I love the last two lines. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/25/2014 4:06:00 AM)

    a fantasy but aren't these dreams real! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014



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