Treasure Island

sagar patil.

(03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

come on now


hearts..become clouds
eyes..start flowing....
signs.....emerge like hurriecane
.....come on.....
..........trouble me.... make me cry.
.....come on now...

take away all ur sorrows
any that u given me
.......or then...tell me....
how i should deal with them
now 4m this journey....
i will have 2 depart
this path where my loved beloved is
r the paths will take....

come on now
come on now....

Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012

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i fall in depression that time i write this poem

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  • Paul Brookes (5/10/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    Another lovely poem spoiled by the use of text speak I do like it by the way just the U and Ur's irk me. Thanks for sharing BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Persian Khushi (9/25/2012 1:29:00 PM)

    am sorry you had to go through that alone...
    a beautiful heartfelt poem came frm yr depressed state. (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (8/22/2012 9:27:00 AM)

    I know how you feel and this poem is beautiful and filled with longing of the Beloved's hands upon your heart and know that in those times He is with us the most a moment where we realize something and become stronger form it, if we allow it to be so, just the knowing that the Divine hand is upon us. Beautiful and I am so happy to see poems from you! :) love and light (Report) Reply

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