Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 12,208 Points (17.03.1965)

Creation - Poem by Lyn Paul

What I have created is so Beautiful
What more could I ask
What more is there in this world
Other than...
Creation of Life
It is
A continuous cycle
Skip the greed
And the Creation will remain Beautiful
Support the greed
And our Creation...
Will
No Longer Be



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL


Comments about Creation by Lyn Paul

  • Rookie - 484 Points Adeline Foster (12/6/2013 4:09:00 PM)

    Nicely done. Read mine - Who Am I -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,840 Points * Sunprincess * (11/10/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    creating isn't like work... it is actually fun and something you would love to do...so maybe this is the secret :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,879 Points Amitava Sur (10/20/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    well thought write up. Life can't move without creation. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/13/2013 3:46:00 PM)

    the all ever eternity called creation. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (10/12/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    A great poem, if we could skip the greed, what a world
    it would be. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (10/12/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    The cycles of life is beauty to behold. Lovely poem Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (10/12/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    The cycles of life are precious and their continuity should be respected. Great thoughts. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 4, 2014


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