Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 18,448 Points (17.03.1965)

Creation - Poem by Lyn Paul

What I have created is so Beautiful
What more could I ask
What more is there in this world
Other than...
Creation of Life
It is
A continuous cycle
Skip the greed
And the Creation will remain Beautiful
Support the greed
And our Creation...
No Longer Be

Copyright Reserved May 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: Greed

Comments about Creation by Lyn Paul

  • Silver Star - 3,389 Points Adeline Foster (12/6/2013 4:09:00 PM)

    Nicely done. Read mine - Who Am I -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (11/10/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    creating isn't like work... it is actually fun and something you would love to maybe this is the secret :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,005 Points Amitava Sur (10/20/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    well thought write up. Life can't move without creation. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (10/13/2013 3:46:00 PM)

    the all ever eternity called creation. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,115 Points Dave Walker (10/12/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    A great poem, if we could skip the greed, what a world
    it would be. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (10/12/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    The cycles of life is beauty to behold. Lovely poem Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (10/12/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    The cycles of life are precious and their continuity should be respected. Great thoughts. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 4, 2014

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