A gloved hand,
Outstretched, awaits
Mine to clasp
Around it as
It's owner's
Smile captures his
Confidence in my answer
Yes. the title tells us what's really going on. The hand might open to clasp yours but it wears a glove, has a hidden motive. The smile I would say, is more of a smirk.
I find this very vague and mystifying but in a good way, it expresses so much with so few words leaving me wanting to read it again and again. Is it about a girl who falls for a boy who she doesn’t want to but finds herself hopelessly under his sway? Since love is a language I find difficult to speak I can only make a simple translation but a sterling read
The poem is nice but i think it needs more development. There's still a lot to write and describe, its a pity that it ended so shortly. You can add some more metaphors, or maybe associate it with something else. =D
This is by far my favorite! I read all the ones you suggested but I picked out one my own and wow! The way you split the lines are very interestingly done. Great job! 10/10 Made me reread it a few times to get the full message. The title itself is lovely! Well done :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You fleck a painting grandeur, with literary pinachey, and in a mere 20 words..Not an easy feat, however you bring it on home...Simpatico! ~FjR~